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2006-08-15 01:11 pm (UTC)
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This was really lovely, especially the interaction with Draco's ex-lover - turning from humour to deep emotion in an instant ::sighs contentedly::
just one quick concrit - the geographical eccentricities kept throwing me out of the story. I can give a quick Britpick if you want
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just one quick concrit - the geographical eccentricities kept throwing me out of the story. I can give a quick Britpick if you want