Thank you. I really enjoy your feedback because you are so frank about it. It helps a lot to hear what's working and what's not.

Yeah, I know the plot may be a bit old... it's so hard to grab an original plot in HP fanfic nowadays. I am just going to go where it leads me. I can already see the ultimate end to this entire fic (looks like it's going to be a trilogy), but exactly how I get there is still a bit mixed up. And some of the end events need some fiddling.

I'm glad you like it, and thank you for the wonderful reviews. :)