ext_17298 ([identity profile] danbi.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rurounihime 2004-09-16 08:52 pm (UTC)

It's not a bad thing, just something that kind of stuck out in this bit of the story. The story itself is great though, so I wouldn't worry too much about one or two small paragraphs.

Sorry if I'm not being nice. I am expressively challenged today.
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