Oldie...

[rurounihime]

The fog here seems to be alive. It is twisting and turning around itself like an endless transparent dragon. Today the fog just rolled down into the place I lived, flowing right over the edge of the drop-off. I love how fog mutes sound and makes me feel like I am the only living breathing thing on this planet. I love the shivers I get when I hear something within the fog, but I have to wait until it reveals itself to my mist-clouded eyes.

Okay. So. Tonight I feel like linking to an older fic I wrote. Sorry guys, not H/D this time. This one's about Lily. One of my first.

Title: Everything Emerald
Author: non-H/D Ru
Rating: PG
Summary: Sometimes one must look through the wave of green in order to truly see.
Warning: depressing.
A/N: link goes to FictionAlley.

Also posted on skyehawke.

I have been told this is a bit AU in one spot, but... eh...

And the green consumes...

Comments

Re: crying

[rurounihime.livejournal.com]

I love you for reviewing this in such a marvelous manner. You got everything I was trying for, as usual. You're such a marvelous reader!

Please don't cry. *sniffle*

The style spun like the river of green and I couldn't look away.

Wow. I had not pictured it like that, but I love this image. Thank you so much!

What touched me most was the timelessness of it all. There are so many words and images, and yet we know it's all happening in a split second.

This. This exactly. Wow.

Thank you soooo much, frulie, for everything.

*blows nose*

[dacro.livejournal.com]

You are so welcome. This is beautiful work, and I'm not resting until everyone has read it!
*hugs*

Someone else had said that is was hard to pull off something like this without having it come over as cheesy or overdone...but this was perfect, really.

You got everything I was trying for, as usual. You're such a marvelous reader!

Well, you always do the same for me too. *hugs* I think you and I just 'get' each other's writing. That's a cool place to be.

I've stopped crying now. *smile*

Re: *blows nose*

[rurounihime.livejournal.com]

I'm glad to hear the tears have stopped for now. ^_^

And I think you are right: we do get each other's writing. It's such a nice connection, wouldn't you agree?

Re: *blows nose*

[dacro.livejournal.com]

It's such a nice connection, wouldn't you agree?

I would...and do. *nods*
heh.