WOW! I miss on day of my flist and suddenly you have a fic and 69 comments! heh. This made me hurt all over, but a fic like this really did need to be written. Lily pretty much said it all,(I just wanted to say "What she said!" heh) but I had to tell you how much this touched me.
I had never felt anything so glorious, and it stung the raw injuries of the past week, a gentle throbbing burn that reminded me I was still alive, and that he was. Tears of relief were rolling down my face. I could taste the fresh air that Harry was sucking in, and hear that sobs as Draco fell apart from the weight being lifted. That was both so beautiful and so painful to watch. When Harry cried out that he didn't want dinner, I was a mess.
The end with the condom was a great move. I could so believe that neither of them ever wanted to go through a scare like that again.
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This made me hurt all over, but a fic like this really did need to be written. Lily pretty much said it all,(I just wanted to say "What she said!" heh) but I had to tell you how much this touched me.
I had never felt anything so glorious, and it stung the raw injuries of the past week, a gentle throbbing burn that reminded me I was still alive, and that he was.
Tears of relief were rolling down my face. I could taste the fresh air that Harry was sucking in, and hear that sobs as Draco fell apart from the weight being lifted. That was both so beautiful and so painful to watch. When Harry cried out that he didn't want dinner, I was a mess.
The end with the condom was a great move. I could so believe that neither of them ever wanted to go through a scare like that again.
*hugs*
Amazing work, as always,
~J~