Ouch. My poor heart. I'm far too young for a heart attack! I loved it just as much as all the other chapters. Maybe more. This story really is fantastic. And your ability to post a new piece of this length each day is...well, a hell of a lot more than I could ever do. When you said: "They weren't drunk, certainly. Harry knew what it felt like to be drunk. The war had taught him that very quickly." Wow. That was powerful. Certainly shows Harry in a light we may not have seen before. It's so small and subtle but it ebbed at me until I acknowledged it's underlying meaning. Oh this story is so beautiful and your writing style is so great! I especially liked how Draco walked away but then CAME BACK to kiss Harry. An original twist we don't often see. I'd say hurry up with the next chapter, but that seems as entirely redundant and unnecessary as this sentence.
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When you said: "They weren't drunk, certainly. Harry knew what it felt like to be drunk. The war had taught him that very quickly." Wow. That was powerful. Certainly shows Harry in a light we may not have seen before. It's so small and subtle but it ebbed at me until I acknowledged it's underlying meaning.
Oh this story is so beautiful and your writing style is so great! I especially liked how Draco walked away but then CAME BACK to kiss Harry. An original twist we don't often see. I'd say hurry up with the next chapter, but that seems as entirely redundant and unnecessary as this sentence.