http://seaghostsoaring.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] seaghostsoaring.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rurounihime 2005-08-23 01:26 am (UTC)

This made me cry, but in a good way.

I was hesitating half way through wondering if it would have a happy ending or if I needed to get lots and lots of tissues and prepare myself for the boys dying.

But the ending! So incredibly beautiful. This fic just reminds me exactly why you are my favorite H/D author of all time.

Sleep would not let him be; it tugged him down again and again, loosing its hold on him only long enough to reveal what he remembered as dawn light, soft and rosy, or the blue blanket of night.
I loved how you worded that, just lovely

“Harry, don’t think about it. Listen to my voice. Listen to me, I promise to shag you all night long when we get out of this. Remember? All night. Imagine it.”

Harry shivered fitfully and clutched at his arms with shaking fingers. His skin was pale and clammy. He turned hollow eyes to Draco. “I do. Every moment I’m conscious.”

This part just simply killed me.

“Don’t cry.”

Harry shook his head. “I won’t if you don’t.”

*hugs you* And the very ending is why I love you! So perfect.

<3


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