I'm going to read this now. Probably the first half tonight and the second tomorrow (it's gone midnight here already), and I'll leave you some detailed feedback. I know how important it is for an author to have their fic reviewed when they've worked really hard on it. I'm supposed to be polishing the third chapter to Rome, but we all love procrastination. *g*

Came across this via friendsfriends, BTW, not by actively lurking. :D