ext_58224 ([identity profile] tsosh.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rurounihime 2006-04-21 11:03 am (UTC)

Beautiful!

(I found this fic via a fic search someone posted on the harrydraco community)

I never read a fic with such a strong, well-written atmosphere. It made me feel as if I was there with the characters, even though it should have been nearly impossible because they are in those extreme conditions that are so different from anything I'm used to. I also loved the way you used the natural colours and weather to show their feelings.
Another thing that was brilliant was the sex - you managed to keep it just as deep and emotional as the rest of the fic, and what I adore the most is your way to describe it in so much detail and make it so easy to imagine, without actually using sexual words! (like orgasm, cock, etc'..)

I'm going to bookmark the rest of your fics so I can read them when I have the time. Thanks for sharing your talent!

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