This story is absolutely beautiful. The slowly build tension reached almost painful peak and details, revealed little by little- clever and wonderfully done. The scene with dead chick (when it became clear what the hidden in Harry's past was tragedy with his daughter) is so emotion-intense and you wrote/convey his break down, his reaction so preciously accurate what it almost unbearable to read. And from that moment the former details became seen in other sight – his focus on dead chicks and abandoned egg, and letters, and other. Terrific story and thanks for your talent.