Those first two chapters killed me. It was painful to read and let a tightness in my chest. And this one really hurt too, but they it put it all back together. And it eased the tightness in my chest.
Draco’s grip tightened and Harry heard him sigh. “It’s okay, Harry. You don’t have to say anything right now.” It's a really beautiful chapter!
Your writing has a subtlety to it that makes the emotions so strong. I know that doesn't make sense, but it feels like this slow building...Lovely job.
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Date: 2006-09-19 04:07 pm (UTC)From:Draco’s grip tightened and Harry heard him sigh. “It’s okay, Harry. You don’t have to say anything right now.”
It's a really beautiful chapter!
Your writing has a subtlety to it that makes the emotions so strong. I know that doesn't make sense, but it feels like this slow building...Lovely job.