You do complicated and messy so well--it's all so very real what you write. It's all there on the table, all of the messy ends, the incomplete actions, the things on the far left that--inexplicably--influence and cause the things at the bottom right. This was beautiful. I must say, I question whether these two will make it. That they so clearly want to--and believe that they can--makes it all the more heartbreaking. Thank you.
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Date: 2006-10-01 09:36 pm (UTC)From: