I really feel for Draco in this. This is a great show of what lack of communication can lead others to believe. What I really like is how you've set up Draco so well for us, that the reader sees what Harry doesn't. I wonder how long he'll remain clueless. Also, Ginny will be watching for Harry's feelings... or denying them.
For the most part, the HD aspect is what's important to me. But your backstory with the others is well written and it leaves me wondering what's going on with Hermione too. It was nice to see what Blaise is up to. He's very strong and determined. I loved reading his thoughts on what he knows he's about to face. For instance, the fact he knows he will endure pain and that he'll be running like hell if he gets out of there. I'm curious about the bond and affect on the other person. Will Seamus feel Blaise's distress? ...assuming he will become distressed in the very near future. ; ) On the other hand, it seems you've successfully shown us the bond through this pair so that we know what to expect with Harry and whoever he bonds with *cough*Draco*cough*. I'm fully aware this means the worst case scenario is very much possible for Blaise.
By the way, if the Blaise/Seamus bond formed unintentionally, couldn't... :D
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Date: 2007-06-11 04:49 pm (UTC)From:For the most part, the HD aspect is what's important to me. But your backstory with the others is well written and it leaves me wondering what's going on with Hermione too. It was nice to see what Blaise is up to. He's very strong and determined. I loved reading his thoughts on what he knows he's about to face. For instance, the fact he knows he will endure pain and that he'll be running like hell if he gets out of there. I'm curious about the bond and affect on the other person. Will Seamus feel Blaise's distress? ...assuming he will become distressed in the very near future. ; ) On the other hand, it seems you've successfully shown us the bond through this pair so that we know what to expect with Harry and whoever he bonds with *cough*Draco*cough*. I'm fully aware this means the worst case scenario is very much possible for Blaise.
By the way, if the Blaise/Seamus bond formed unintentionally, couldn't... :D