*gasp* So much to see and feel in this chapter. I'm so glad you wrote this. I'm all shaky from the angst, but I can't wait to see where this is all going.
You blew my mind with this moment: Draco snorted softly. “I would think his very survival up until this point is more than enough proof of how strong his will is.” Lucius’ eyes narrowed. “Hardly. It is more proof of the Dark Lord’s incompetence.”
woah. I was wondering what was going on in his head. I loved your exploration of Lucius and the dementors. Chilling. I'm worried about Draco's doubts and his mental stability at this point, but I hope he'll allow himself to fall back into Harry's arms and be free.
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Date: 2005-01-04 09:56 am (UTC)From:So much to see and feel in this chapter. I'm so glad you wrote this. I'm all shaky from the angst, but I can't wait to see where this is all going.
You blew my mind with this moment:
Draco snorted softly. “I would think his very survival up until this point is more than enough proof of how strong his will is.”
Lucius’ eyes narrowed. “Hardly. It is more proof of the Dark Lord’s incompetence.”
woah. I was wondering what was going on in his head. I loved your exploration of Lucius and the dementors. Chilling.
I'm worried about Draco's doubts and his mental stability at this point, but I hope he'll allow himself to fall back into Harry's arms and be free.