Your turn of phrase is wonderfully artful in invoking a certain atmosphere. You don't include any superfluous phrasing.
Awww, much too nice! My head is getting bigger... ^_~
The need to be together and yet fearing the reprisals of past transgressions, especially with such a serious matter, was so well handled and even in the end, the rawness of something thought lost but now found, really does strike a chord.
Oh, you've nailed it again. You always do. I love your readings of my stories. Thank you so much for getting at the meat of it all. And for being so struck by it. I did not know this fic was going to hit so hard... other people have been flooring me with their comments, and yours is no exception. I loff you lots for this. *adores you MORE*
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Date: 2004-12-13 10:56 pm (UTC)From:Awww, much too nice! My head is getting bigger... ^_~
The need to be together and yet fearing the reprisals of past transgressions, especially with such a serious matter, was so well handled and even in the end, the rawness of something thought lost but now found, really does strike a chord.
Oh, you've nailed it again. You always do. I love your readings of my stories. Thank you so much for getting at the meat of it all. And for being so struck by it. I did not know this fic was going to hit so hard... other people have been flooring me with their comments, and yours is no exception. I loff you lots for this. *adores you MORE*