"You picked up on exactly what I was going for. Thank you."
Woohooo! Ten point score for me! I'm smart!
"I really wanted that idea of him sweeping Harry up unexpectedly."
What makes this so special is that usually, when a kiss like that happens in fanfiction, it just does. Right then and there. But you had Draco walk away and Harry accept it on a positive note, which signals some sort of end to the event and chapter. But then it wasn't! He came back and surprised us. Like the cream filling, yummy and sweet. THAT'S why it was so good.
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Date: 2004-12-23 01:28 am (UTC)From:Woohooo! Ten point score for me! I'm smart!
What makes this so special is that usually, when a kiss like that happens in fanfiction, it just does. Right then and there. But you had Draco walk away and Harry accept it on a positive note, which signals some sort of end to the event and chapter. But then it wasn't! He came back and surprised us. Like the cream filling, yummy and sweet. THAT'S why it was so good.