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[rurounihime]

Okay, so I'm not even sure if this is an issue, but I saw a bud offer this, and I am wondering if anyone wants to see my commentary on a fic I have written. I am getting set for Simply Charming pt. 3, and I thought I might throw this out there in the meantime.

Um. I think a poll might be the best way to do this. So below I have a list of stories I am willing to comment on. They are all H/D, various ratings, and the fics themselves can be found here.

I will write commentary on the most-selected one. And we'll see how it goes from there.

Anyway. ^_^ On to the POLL.

[Poll #478324]

Comments

[coffeejunkii.livejournal.com]

oh, shush. *blushes*

of course every author has favorites. i certainly have mine :). i imagine that this story must have taken a long time, or maybe that's just because i am not sure i could write something like this [just working out all the background stuff must have taken a while]. there's this tension in it...this feeling of being constrained, which obviously makes sense given the topic. hmm, yes, i def. want to hear more about this!

[rurounihime.livejournal.com]

Hehehe. Well, tell you what: if it doesn't get voted as the one, you can feel free to ask me any questions you want about it over IM. ^__^

I certainly have questions for you with your fic. Like the whole background of Harry and Draco and whatever spell it was that got Draco preggers has me so curious. And what their relationship was like before that.

[coffeejunkii.livejournal.com]

yay! thank you :). considering that "meaningful conversation" is in the lead now, i'll def. take you up on that offer.

oh, good questions! all things i haven't quite figured out yet....well, the spell i sort of have. draco explains it to remus in the first part. i'm not sure i'll go into more depth on that, but who knows? as for the other question, it's odd, i hadn't thought about that before. i have a feeling that their relationship had just gotten more serious right before draco got pregnant--maybe they moved in with each other like a month or two before? once they find out about the pregnancy, harry would start feeling responsible for draco in a way he hadn't before [which might piss draco off at first]. hmmm. does that make sense?

[rurounihime.livejournal.com]

Oh, it absolutely makes sense. Especially the part about Draco being pissed off, because that's how I see Draco: very independent on the outside, and very unused to people trying to love him. PLUS, he's a git sometimes. He would be pissy about Harry trying to do things for him. ^_^

I remember the spell explanation. And I remember liking how much you kept me in the dark at first, gradually letting the answers to my questions manifest themselves as the fic progressed.

[coffeejunkii.livejournal.com]

yes. it would annoy the hell out of draco if harry suddenly started doting on him on top of having to deal with being pregnant, of all things. but after a while, he probably starts appreciating it, especially once they are on the run and everything gets difficult and tiresome for draco.

thank you. i always like when my initial ignorance comes off as well-crafted plot development ;).

[rurounihime.livejournal.com]

I like that too. I mean, I don't mean to do some of the things people interpret from my writing, but sometimes I take it as a sign of a well-crafted story: when everything ends up coming together, you know you've got something that works.