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[rurounihime]

Okay, so I'm not even sure if this is an issue, but I saw a bud offer this, and I am wondering if anyone wants to see my commentary on a fic I have written. I am getting set for Simply Charming pt. 3, and I thought I might throw this out there in the meantime.

Um. I think a poll might be the best way to do this. So below I have a list of stories I am willing to comment on. They are all H/D, various ratings, and the fics themselves can be found here.

I will write commentary on the most-selected one. And we'll see how it goes from there.

Anyway. ^_^ On to the POLL.

[Poll #478324]

Comments

[rurounihime.livejournal.com]

Oh, it absolutely makes sense. Especially the part about Draco being pissed off, because that's how I see Draco: very independent on the outside, and very unused to people trying to love him. PLUS, he's a git sometimes. He would be pissy about Harry trying to do things for him. ^_^

I remember the spell explanation. And I remember liking how much you kept me in the dark at first, gradually letting the answers to my questions manifest themselves as the fic progressed.

[coffeejunkii.livejournal.com]

yes. it would annoy the hell out of draco if harry suddenly started doting on him on top of having to deal with being pregnant, of all things. but after a while, he probably starts appreciating it, especially once they are on the run and everything gets difficult and tiresome for draco.

thank you. i always like when my initial ignorance comes off as well-crafted plot development ;).

[rurounihime.livejournal.com]

I like that too. I mean, I don't mean to do some of the things people interpret from my writing, but sometimes I take it as a sign of a well-crafted story: when everything ends up coming together, you know you've got something that works.