rurounihime: (faramir by tiggingwithdom)
rurounihime ([personal profile] rurounihime) wrote2005-05-21 12:57 pm
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Drabbley

Here's a little drabble-and-a-half. Yes, honest to goodness, 150 words ONLY. This is for [livejournal.com profile] tipgardner, who has been urging me to try out new things, including drabbling again. ^_^ *loves*

It can go with this story if you like, but it doesn't have to.

(H/D, PG, boys aren't mine, yadda yadda)

It was the same bed, and the candles were lit. Cream colored sheets, burgundy duvet rolled at their feet, and four soft pillows with their scent in the cotton. Harry’s jacket perched over the mahogany dresser. The antique bookshelf still held spellbooks and Muggle novels, and Draco toasted Pansy’s wedding silently over and over in the photo there. But Draco caught Harry’s hand and Harry looked at him and waited.

Draco breathed. “Husband… is a big word.”

The enormity of it settled over Draco. He bit his lip, blinking. Harry’s hand crept to Draco’s wrist, thumb moving in slow circles over his palm. He kissed the gold band on Draco’s finger, then his own.

“Yes, it is.”

Draco closed his eyes. When he opened them, deep green shone back. Harry found his mouth tenderly with his own, and their room was the same as always, if just a little warmer.

[identity profile] seaghostsoaring.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 01:07 pm (UTC)(link)
=D!!!!! I'm officially awake now. And what a way to wake up too.

I like how he kissed the rings, that was so sweet =)
Marvelous <3 <3 <3

[identity profile] jane-sehrn-ta.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 01:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, lovely! I like the idea that it's the same bed, the same room, and yet something really big has changed between them. Good work!

[identity profile] sarcastic-irony.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 01:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

And short, too. I'm proud!

[identity profile] shikishi.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 01:43 pm (UTC)(link)
That was lovely Ru. Very warm. :D

[identity profile] jexay.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 02:07 pm (UTC)(link)
O M G!!!!! It's a drabble! Go you! *does the hula*

Loved it sweets! And oh so true... ;D

So, how are you? *smooches*

[identity profile] willysunny.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 02:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Absolutely beautiful, darling. Just what a needed. Thank you. :)

[identity profile] muchspork.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 04:00 pm (UTC)(link)
loved it! last sentence= rocking.

[identity profile] everlaughingone.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 04:35 pm (UTC)(link)
seriously perrrrfect!

*hugs*

Jess

[identity profile] coffeejunkii.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 07:22 pm (UTC)(link)
awwwww :)

the last line is my favorite.
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[identity profile] lauriegilbert.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I'd say lovely, but others beat me too it. So let's try perfectly delightful instead! :D

[identity profile] ravenpan.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
*squeals* AWW!!!

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 12:13 am (UTC)(link)
Harry found his mouth tenderly with his own, and their room was the same as always, if just a little warmer.

Oh. *hugs* This washes me with warm! Love the whole drabble, the tenderness of it all, but this last line just digs right into my heart.
*loves you*
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[identity profile] meredyth-13.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 12:48 am (UTC)(link)
Wonderful! I adore this - just a few simple words, and a whole life of our boys told like a novel. *wraps up Ru's drabble in a big warm hug*

Happy now!

[identity profile] tipgardner.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 10:38 am (UTC)(link)
Awww...a fluffy drabble! You're so very talented, Luv and this drabble is lovely.

[identity profile] miss-charmed.livejournal.com 2005-05-23 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
YAY Ru love! You made me go all tingly :D

[identity profile] winstonmom.livejournal.com 2005-05-23 11:15 am (UTC)(link)
I was really craving some nice Rou writing and my wish came true!
Thanks for sharing!

[identity profile] delaria.livejournal.com 2005-05-24 09:53 am (UTC)(link)
Hi. I found a fic rec to you and wandered over. I liked what I saw, and would like to friend you. Would you mind?

And this, and the fic you said could possibly be in the same world, are very sweet. Draco deals with marriage so well, and his crack about being the bride made me laugh and laugh.
-DelaRia

[identity profile] kirili.livejournal.com 2005-08-12 03:02 am (UTC)(link)
*glee*

:D Just a puddle at your their feet. O.O ooer oO