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rurounihime ([personal profile] rurounihime) wrote2005-05-21 12:57 pm
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Drabbley

Here's a little drabble-and-a-half. Yes, honest to goodness, 150 words ONLY. This is for [livejournal.com profile] tipgardner, who has been urging me to try out new things, including drabbling again. ^_^ *loves*

It can go with this story if you like, but it doesn't have to.

(H/D, PG, boys aren't mine, yadda yadda)

It was the same bed, and the candles were lit. Cream colored sheets, burgundy duvet rolled at their feet, and four soft pillows with their scent in the cotton. Harry’s jacket perched over the mahogany dresser. The antique bookshelf still held spellbooks and Muggle novels, and Draco toasted Pansy’s wedding silently over and over in the photo there. But Draco caught Harry’s hand and Harry looked at him and waited.

Draco breathed. “Husband… is a big word.”

The enormity of it settled over Draco. He bit his lip, blinking. Harry’s hand crept to Draco’s wrist, thumb moving in slow circles over his palm. He kissed the gold band on Draco’s finger, then his own.

“Yes, it is.”

Draco closed his eyes. When he opened them, deep green shone back. Harry found his mouth tenderly with his own, and their room was the same as always, if just a little warmer.

[identity profile] seaghostsoaring.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 01:07 pm (UTC)(link)
=D!!!!! I'm officially awake now. And what a way to wake up too.

I like how he kissed the rings, that was so sweet =)
Marvelous <3 <3 <3

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:23 am (UTC)(link)
Glad I could wake you up on the right side of the bed. ^__^ Thank you for reading!

[identity profile] jane-sehrn-ta.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 01:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, lovely! I like the idea that it's the same bed, the same room, and yet something really big has changed between them. Good work!

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:24 am (UTC)(link)
Pegged it, m'dear! *loves* Thank you!

Hey, have you gotten a chance to see Sith yet? ^___^

[identity profile] jane-sehrn-ta.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:38 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Now that would be like me asking you if you'd seen "Goblet of Fire" a few days after it had come out :). I love it, although it seems to have cursed me with a headache since then (Revenge of the Sith indeed!). There are a number of flaws with it, but that just opened the doors for a whole bunch of plot bunnies to come in, so I'm a happy camper. If it had been perfect, there would be nothing left to do! :D

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-23 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I was just happy that it surpassed Eps 1 and 2 BY FAR. My god, it was almost like watching the original three again. Almost. Not exactly, but still much better than the other two. I loved Obi Wan in Ep 3. LOVED. His relationship with Anakin was so beautifully done. So like a father/son togetherness. Anakin just wanted to please him... You could tell he was the only thread holding Anakin to where he was. Anyway. I liked the show. ^_^

[identity profile] jane-sehrn-ta.livejournal.com 2005-05-23 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
*smiles* I'm glad you liked it. I saw it again today and I'm definitely even more in love with it now. I agree, the Obi/Ani relationship was wonderfully built. That's why it was so sad it fell apart :(.

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-24 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Yesh. I am sure you have a million more plot bunnies now though. ^_~

[identity profile] sarcastic-irony.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 01:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

And short, too. I'm proud!

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:25 am (UTC)(link)
Bwahahaha! *loves* Thank you. You are too cute.

[identity profile] shikishi.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 01:43 pm (UTC)(link)
That was lovely Ru. Very warm. :D

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, Shik. *hugs*

[identity profile] jexay.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 02:07 pm (UTC)(link)
O M G!!!!! It's a drabble! Go you! *does the hula*

Loved it sweets! And oh so true... ;D

So, how are you? *smooches*

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:27 am (UTC)(link)
OMG I know! Heh, I still cheated: it's not a pure drabble. *frets* But I'm not too worried. Thank you so much, lovely!

I am doing well. My feet HATE me for going dancing with heels last night, but otherwise... How was your trip? I missed you!

[identity profile] willysunny.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 02:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Absolutely beautiful, darling. Just what a needed. Thank you. :)

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:28 am (UTC)(link)
*kiss* Thank you for reading! A little follow-up of sorts, to the one I wrote earlier. I'm glad you liked it.

[identity profile] muchspork.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 04:00 pm (UTC)(link)
loved it! last sentence= rocking.

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:28 am (UTC)(link)
*loves you* Thanks, dearest!

[identity profile] everlaughingone.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 04:35 pm (UTC)(link)
seriously perrrrfect!

*hugs*

Jess

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:29 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwwww... *glomps* Thanks, love.

How goes the Quidditch fic?

[identity profile] coffeejunkii.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 07:22 pm (UTC)(link)
awwwww :)

the last line is my favorite.

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:31 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, my lovely. *kisskisskiss* How are you?

[identity profile] coffeejunkii.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 10:12 am (UTC)(link)
i'm good! i went on a little shopping spree yesterday, which always improves my mood :). needed new summer clothes. i might be posting pics later...

what's going on with you?

oh, and i have new icons. this is one of them!

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-23 07:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Malfoy should be in a boy band. That would be the most squee-worthy event ever. ^_~ He can be the Bad Boy. Heeheehee.

I just had a friend visiting from out of town for the weekend, so that was fun. I am tired though. We were up late both nights she was here.

[identity profile] coffeejunkii.livejournal.com 2005-05-23 08:41 pm (UTC)(link)
it would be!! he'd insist on being the bad boy, naturally.

We were up late both nights she was here.

that's the way it should be :)

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[identity profile] lauriegilbert.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I'd say lovely, but others beat me too it. So let's try perfectly delightful instead! :D

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:31 am (UTC)(link)
O.o

*adores you* Thank you so much!
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[identity profile] lauriegilbert.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:33 am (UTC)(link)
*adores back and glomps* You're welcome darlin'! It's easy to tell the truth :D

[identity profile] ravenpan.livejournal.com 2005-05-21 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
*squeals* AWW!!!

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:33 am (UTC)(link)
Hahahaha! *glomps*

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 12:13 am (UTC)(link)
Harry found his mouth tenderly with his own, and their room was the same as always, if just a little warmer.

Oh. *hugs* This washes me with warm! Love the whole drabble, the tenderness of it all, but this last line just digs right into my heart.
*loves you*

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:35 am (UTC)(link)
This washes me with warm!

^_______^ Oh, sweets, have I told you lately how much I adore you? *kiss*

*makes goal* I have a bud visiting, but I will get our story back to you with additions by Tues. night. Promise.

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 11:53 am (UTC)(link)
*adores back*
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[identity profile] meredyth-13.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 12:48 am (UTC)(link)
Wonderful! I adore this - just a few simple words, and a whole life of our boys told like a novel. *wraps up Ru's drabble in a big warm hug*

Happy now!

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 09:36 am (UTC)(link)
just a few simple words, and a whole life of our boys told like a novel.

Wow! I love you. Thank you so much for that! It's a high compliment. *squeeze*

[identity profile] tipgardner.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 10:38 am (UTC)(link)
Awww...a fluffy drabble! You're so very talented, Luv and this drabble is lovely.

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-23 07:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Trying to cut my writing short again, for once. Of course, I will have to march back to long chapters too. But this was a great experiment. Thanks for pushing me to do it.

[identity profile] miss-charmed.livejournal.com 2005-05-23 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
YAY Ru love! You made me go all tingly :D

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-23 07:17 pm (UTC)(link)
*likes teh tingly*

Thanks, love! *smooch*

[identity profile] winstonmom.livejournal.com 2005-05-23 11:15 am (UTC)(link)
I was really craving some nice Rou writing and my wish came true!
Thanks for sharing!

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-23 07:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, sweety! Thank youuuuuuuuuuuu! *kiss* I'm so happy you liked it. Thank you for reading.

[identity profile] delaria.livejournal.com 2005-05-24 09:53 am (UTC)(link)
Hi. I found a fic rec to you and wandered over. I liked what I saw, and would like to friend you. Would you mind?

And this, and the fic you said could possibly be in the same world, are very sweet. Draco deals with marriage so well, and his crack about being the bride made me laugh and laugh.
-DelaRia

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-24 05:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Welcome to my lj! I don't mind if you friend me. I'm glad you like my fics enough to want to! *hugs*

Hahaha, I'm so happy you liked these two. I wanted to explore how their marriage would go, and without all the angst I usually write in. A little fluff was in order. Thank you so much for reading and for this lovely comment. ^_^

[identity profile] delaria.livejournal.com 2005-05-24 05:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Fluff is always nice, though angst is too.

You did a convincing take of the marriage.

Welcome, and thank you. *goes off to friend*

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-05-24 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
^_^

[identity profile] kirili.livejournal.com 2005-08-12 03:02 am (UTC)(link)
*glee*

:D Just a puddle at your their feet. O.O ooer oO

[identity profile] kirili.livejournal.com 2005-08-12 03:02 am (UTC)(link)
Ahem.
Obviously had trouble deciding.

[identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com 2005-08-13 11:37 am (UTC)(link)
*snicker* No melting! *puts kirili back together again*

I need my kirili.