I love Narcissa in this, so delightfully sobbish. She sounds exectly like I would imagine her when dealing with Harry, disdaiful and hateful. And I really like the feeling that there is something more to her visit than meets the eye. After all, if she is so sure that Draco will "come to his senses" then why bother to go? Why waste her oh-so-precious time on trying to pursuade Harry to end it before Draco can? *beams* I love puzzles like this, and I can't wait to see how it ends!
Lovely imagery as always, the rings especially stick beautifully in my mind as well done. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 2005-07-25 08:12 pm (UTC)From:I love Narcissa in this, so delightfully sobbish. She sounds exectly like I would imagine her when dealing with Harry, disdaiful and hateful. And I really like the feeling that there is something more to her visit than meets the eye. After all, if she is so sure that Draco will "come to his senses" then why bother to go? Why waste her oh-so-precious time on trying to pursuade Harry to end it before Draco can? *beams* I love puzzles like this, and I can't wait to see how it ends!
Lovely imagery as always, the rings especially stick beautifully in my mind as well done. Thanks for sharing!