The arguing was so real, so...spiky, at first. It's one of those things that seems too difficult to capture unless you've just been doing it yourself
Ooh, what lovely praise! Spiky. I love that. And THANK YOU for saying it seemed realistic. That is a great compliment. You've made me blush with pleasure.
And oh my god, you've left me shaking. Shaking. The anger without cleverness, without thought--the characters are blunt and painful in the way they batter each other, but YOUR words are precise and razor-thin.
And that. That was... I'm a bit speechless. *smooch* Thanks for taking my words away.
As for reccing it, I would be honoured if you feel like doing that. Thank you so much for waiting for this, and for reading. ^_^
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Date: 2006-04-18 10:39 pm (UTC)From:Ooh, what lovely praise! Spiky. I love that. And THANK YOU for saying it seemed realistic. That is a great compliment. You've made me blush with pleasure.
And oh my god, you've left me shaking. Shaking. The anger without cleverness, without thought--the characters are blunt and painful in the way they batter each other, but YOUR words are precise and razor-thin.
And that. That was... I'm a bit speechless. *smooch* Thanks for taking my words away.
As for reccing it, I would be honoured if you feel like doing that. Thank you so much for waiting for this, and for reading. ^_^