Ohhh, this is lovely. Reading through the whole arc was so much more satisfying than writing my term paper due later tonight. I wanted to leave feedback on each gorgeous piece but I really couldn't stop from clicking on the next part, especially in that terribly angsty part of it...suffice it to say that your characterization of Harry and Draco are stunning and fascinating, the dynamics of their relationship interesting (and so meltingly sweet! I must have read those first two pieces at least a half dozen times each!) -- and through it all, you make everything heartbreakingly realistic, from their nervousness, stubbornness, and lack of communication with each other...ah, the part about Draco and previous engagements broke my heart, and the image of Harry hugging his pillow and crying was maddening, but thank you so much for putting them so sweetly back together.
I have to say my favorite so far is probably the Romeo and Juliet one, or even this one -- Harry's Slytherin tendencies at the end cracked me up, but Draco and the strawberry testing was so sweet. And it was delicious to read about all the bakery's offerings!
You are a fantastic writer, and I do thank this anonymous person for asking about the progress of this arc, because it's a wonderful little universe, overly dramatic Ron and knitting Hermione and all. And I can't wait to see Draco taking pleasure in kicking Seamus's flirty Irish arse out of the wedding. Or finding out just what that middle name is...
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Date: 2006-05-04 04:33 pm (UTC)From:I have to say my favorite so far is probably the Romeo and Juliet one, or even this one -- Harry's Slytherin tendencies at the end cracked me up, but Draco and the strawberry testing was so sweet. And it was delicious to read about all the bakery's offerings!
You are a fantastic writer, and I do thank this anonymous person for asking about the progress of this arc, because it's a wonderful little universe, overly dramatic Ron and knitting Hermione and all.
And I can't wait to see Draco taking pleasure in kicking Seamus's flirty Irish arse out of the wedding.Or finding out just what that middle name is...♥