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Title: An Evening in August
Author: me
Rating: R
Pairing: H/D
Summary: In the midst of Draco and Harry's first week, dinner is required. Sequel to The Arrangement.

Disclaimer: The boys don't belong to me. I like to play with them, but it's like borrowing a toy from a friend: eventually you have to give it back in good condition, without your own name permanent-markered onto the plastic leg somewhere.

ETA: [livejournal.com profile] flamewarrior was kind enough to do a Britpick for this a few months back. So here is the new version, after much lazing about on my part. Sorry about the wait...

Also posted on AO3 and skyehawke.

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An Evening in August


“Merlin Almighty, finally.” Draco stalked in from the kitchen, wrapped one hand around Harry’s shirt collar and pulled him toward the hall. Harry shrugged the rest of the way out of his coat and flung it back in the general direction of the foyer, then tried to set his briefcase down as gently as he could in the hallway. Draco turned around and smacked at his hand until he dropped it. “Come on, Potter. You’re already late.”

“I was only here three hours ago, you know,” Harry said, smirking.

Draco cast him a malevolent glare and dragged him into the bedroom. “Yes, I do know. And you should know that I have different needs when we’re together, Harry. Things just don’t hold over like they used to; I’m entitled to more.”

Harry let Draco tug him fully into the room, and then fell backward with an oof under the other man’s hard shove, landing on the bed. “That a fact?”

“Don’t patronize me, Potter. You’ve no idea the crate of snakes you’re opening.” He climbed up onto the bed, yanking at Harry’s tie with more than capable hands. Harry reached for his own belt buckle and Draco slapped his hands away—and then gave a huff and pulled them back to their task. “Oh, go on then. Faster anyway.”

“Ooh, you do have needs,” Harry teased, craning his neck as Draco yanked the tie free at last.

The blond grinned down at him with a decidedly worrisome glint in his eye. “Very specific ones. Right now, for instance, I needed to be inside you an hour ago. No delivery, Harry, very disconcerting. I might have to write a complaint.”

Harry let his face go slack and dropped his hands from his belt. “And what if I don’t want to do that?”

Draco’s fingers stilled on the buttons of his shirt. Eyes the colour of smoke narrowed and darkened, and he sat back on Harry’s thighs with a barely contained sigh. “Then of course, we won’t do it, Harry,” he muttered.

Harry let Draco resign himself for only two more seconds before taking hold of his hips and flipping him over on the bed, pressing his body full-length against Draco’s. His lover’s thighs tightened convulsively around his hips. Draco shuddered.

“To tell you the truth,” Harry murmured, smiling – undulating his body very pointedly, “I think I am running a bit late tonight.”

He bent and kissed Draco tenderly on the mouth, and his lover began to chuckle halfway through it. “Dreadfully so, Potter.” He wiggled swiftly down on the bed until he fit against Harry perfectly, all curves and warmth and long limbs. “But I’m going to have to stand firm about my personal requirements. This is never going to work if they aren’t met.”

Harry rolled back over with a dramatic sigh and flung his arms up over his head, hanging onto one of his wrists with his free hand. “In the interest of making this work, then.”

Draco raised himself up and bent over him again, peering hawkishly. “Harry.”

Harry rolled his eyes. He lurched upward and grabbed Draco’s shoulder, pulling him down into a long, messy kiss. “Malfoy. Don’t think this need of yours is a one-way street.”

“Oh, regardless of how it starts, it never ends that way, Harry, I can assure you.” He swung one leg back over Harry’s waist and reclaimed his mouth, making short work of his clothes. Harry forced himself to remain as still as possible as he was stripped, and was gratified to feel Draco’s hands slide up his bare arms at last and tangle their fingers together.

“Never starts that… that way either… apparently,” Harry hissed out. Amazing how quickly Draco divested him of speech as well. Draco pressed down against him and rolled his hips slowly, agonizingly. Harry arched without planning it, and his lover nibbled at his throat with a little less control than he had before.

“Oh, do hold still, Potter,” he breathed. “Can’t exactly attend to you if you’re going to be impatient.”

Harry wormed one hand free and caught Draco’s chin in gentle fingers, raising those clear grey eyes to meet his. “You…”

He fell silent, unsure of what he’d been about to say. Draco searched his face and nodded, a tiny smile curving his mouth. “Relax. I’ll go slowly.”

“Just… been awhile,” Harry managed as Draco returned to his throat. He blinked against the insatiable heat pooling in his loins. He wanted to move. Move, or… move. His lover nodded again.

“Alright then, Harry. How long? As your payment to me for being late.”

Harry looked at him. “It was with you.”

For a moment, Draco’s eyes flickered. He closed them and opened them again, drawing a deep breath. “That long?”

Harry nodded, feeling a flush crawl up his throat. But Draco’s gaze did not waver from
his. He leaned in and soothed Harry’s panting lips with a soft kiss. Eased his tongue inside his mouth and stroked gently, lingering over every hollow and curve. At last, Harry had to turn his head for air, gasping.

“Then I’ll make it that good again,” Draco whispered, the sound tickling across the shell of his ear. Harry could only nod.


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They were at the Indian Corner Café an hour later, Harry resting idly in his patio chair as his protesting muscles finally began to relax. Draco grinned at him from across the table and two mostly empty plates of vegetable samosas, and the sunset’s light beamed in over the rooftops in opals and violets, setting his hair aflame. Harry leered back, not bothering to hide it for their waitress’ peace of mind. The girl rolled her dark eyes visibly and flounced back inside with the finished plates to retrieve their entrees.

“Salazar, Potter. Now you’ll have to leave her some sort of extra tip to assuage the raging guilt that’s about to wash over you.”

Harry laughed and shifted with a contented groan. “Worth it. No one else has visual sex with me across a restaurant table like you do.”

Draco took an elegant sip from his water glass, pointing at Harry with one slender finger. “That was nothing but a mere undressing, I’ll have you know.”

“Mmm,” Harry hummed to himself. Draco’s fingers… It was almost surreal, looking at them. So perfectly kept, long and refined, and they had been all over and inside his body only thirty minutes ago. Their dinner arrived, and Harry found that he couldn’t quite bring himself to look at the waitress after all.

“Thank you,” Draco’s cultured voice intoned effortlessly. Harry lifted his own glass of water and turned toward the bustling thoroughfare beyond the railing to watch the onset of night.

“You know, Harry, I can teach you the finer details of undressing with the eyes.” Draco leaned forward, brushing Harry’s hand with his thumb. “That way you won’t always have to shag me through my expensive trousers.”

“Is that what I’ve been doing?” Harry returned glibly and Draco’s laugh spilled easily into the patio’s chatter.

“Oh, yes. Across the top of the table with all the chefs watching, no less.”

“You like a good show.”

Draco sniffed. “Of course I do. But there is an art to it, Harry.”

“You’ll have to teach me sometime,” he rallied lazily. “And make it that good again.”

Draco’s lip quirked. He looked down at his curry with a small smile. “No regrets, then?”

It might have been the light that coloured Draco’s cheeks. Harry felt his mouth slide into a faint smile of its own. “None. Just some sore muscles. I’m sure I’ll work them out in Avebury tomorrow.”

Draco frowned. “You’re going to Wiltshire tomorrow?”

“Just for the morning. Then to Yorkshire. Wensleydale.” Harry took a long drink and picked up his fork, wincing as he readjusted his seat. He halted, the first bite halfway to his mouth, and met Draco’s narrowed gaze. “Not overnight.”

Draco sat back, setting his own fork down. “Well.”

Harry watched him, then gestured with his fork. “You should eat that, you know. I’m not going out of the country, for Merlin’s sake.”

Draco leaned forward again, a canny gleam in one eye. “Oh, did I mention I’ve got to go for a conference in Aberdeen next month? Four days.”

Harry glared at him, suddenly not as hungry as he had been. “No. You did not.”

Draco’s eyebrow arched infuriatingly. “They’ve a new Ageing Potion they’d like to market throughout Britain. I’ve got to go and suffer their tripe before I sign the papers for ten years more research. Bloody thing has a habit of knocking people into early dementia.”

Harry took a steadying breath. The street outside was darkening, the breeze picking up. Tiny winking lights in the rose trellis to the right flickered on. “Four days?”

Draco nodded serenely, irking Harry with his smile. Then suddenly it slipped into a grin. “I’ve reserved a room for two, if you can get the time. It’s a damned pub. Bed will be very cozy.”

Harry felt himself thawing, and Draco’s thumb brushing over the back of his hand once more finally did him in. He grinned back and flicked Draco’s fingers away fondly. “I should plan overtime all month, just to spite you.”

“Oh, you should. But you won’t.”

“No, I won’t.” Harry leaned back and let the cool evening air wash over his face. “Though I don’t know if four days will work.”

Draco gave a pained sighed and picked up his fork again. “Three, then. Or two, and Apparate. This isn’t a request, Potter.”

Harry smiled as sweetly as he could. “And this isn’t a refusal.”

Draco’s smirk would have dumped sarcasm all over Harry’ plate had he been close enough. Harry chuckled and took a bite. The taste of cardamom and garlic burst against his tongue and he sighed happily. “Here, have a bite. It’s—Draco.”

His lover’s fork was poised over his food, dropping neglected curried chicken onto his mango chutney. Draco was staring over the patio railing with a decidedly sour expression. As Harry watched, the blond closed his eyes and rubbed his forehead with his free hand. “Godric’s shriveled balls…”

Harry craned his neck over his shoulder, but there were too many people passing by on the street to see which had caught his lover’s ire… until one young man turned with a slightly furrowed brow and made for the patio. Harry glanced back to find Draco looking even more discontent. “Who is he?”

“A Muggle. Old acquaintance,” Draco muttered.

Harry appraised him, concentrating on the slight twitch of Draco’s fingers. “Old lover, you mean.”

The blond rolled his eyes, moving restlessly in his chair. “Well, I have had quite a few. They’re bound to pop up out of the ground every so often. Can’t really be helped, but it can be avoided. Let’s get these for take away.”

“Little late for that.” Harry watched the man approach. He was tall, fairly well-muscled, with a deep tan and soft-looking chestnut hair curling around his face. He would have been incredibly attractive, if not for the confused frown marring his forehead.

Harry fought a smirk. Hell, even with the frown. The man edged his way gracefully past two closely packed tables, laying an appeasing hand on the shoulder of a disturbed patron. “Well, I can see why you liked him. How long ago was this?”

Draco was stretched in his chair, feigning laziness with an expression carved out of solid stone. The faint sneer, the narrowed eyes, the lifted chin. He swirled his water glass in one hand. “Two long years ago, Harry, if you must know. And it ended two long years ago as well. I don’t really see why he’s here.”

Harry smiled at his lover, darting his eyes over the refined, aloof figure the tall blond cut in the grasp of his chair. “I do.”

“Draco,” the newcomer said, coming to a halt at their table. He glanced at Harry for a moment, and then turned a still-amazed look in Draco’s direction. The man’s eyes drank in Draco’s sprawled form. “I didn’t expect to see you here. It’s been… well, it’s been ages.”

But the man’s initial caution couldn’t hold past the careful greeting and he smiled at last, a dazzlingly childlike grin. Harry caught fondness there that he recognized. Draco returned the smile stiffly.

“Yes, hello.”

The man’s face smoothed into passivity, and he blinked. “I was just going for milk and there you were. I’d no idea you liked this restaurant. I used to come all the time.”

Draco’s eyes dropped slightly, and when they swung up again, they had lost a little of their annoyance. A very little. Harry raised an eyebrow that only his lover would see. Draco’s lips thinned. “We’re just out for dinner,” he volleyed.

The man seemed to remember Harry’s presence. This time, a vague but definite wariness stole over his face. He turned toward Harry uncertainly, and Harry felt himself being sized up. “Hello. And… and you are?”

Draco nudged Harry before he could answer and lifted his drink toward the man. “This is Jonathan Hereford. Jonathan, I’d introduce you, but I’m afraid my friend and I were about to leave, and I’ve got a very important appointment to keep.”

“Draco, stop it.” Harry turned toward the man and held out his hand gamely. “Harry Potter. Nice to meet you.”

The man blanched, and then colored again immediately. His nostrils flared. Harry blinked and dropped his hand.

“Harry Potter,” Jonathan Hereford stated in a flat voice. “Potter, then. Isn’t that wonderful.”

He turned an icy glare Draco’s way, and then actually growled at Harry before whipping around and striding away. Harry felt his own jaw drop.

“Bloody… Well. That’s certainly a new one. Thought you said he was a Muggle.”

“He is,” Draco muttered.

“How’d he know who I was then?”

Draco shifted uncomfortably in his chair. “He… happens to know your first name.”

“How would he know that?” Harry said blankly.

“Yes, well. He might know it because... I called it out while he was in the midst of shagging me once.”

The last was spoken so quickly it took Harry nearly a full five seconds to register the reality of the situation. He stared at Draco incredulously. It was the hot flush creeping up Draco’s throat, and the disparaging frown that finally did him in. Harry began to laugh. “Oh, Merlin… oh my lord…”

Draco threw his napkin at Harry with a grimace, then turned his glare on the man’s retreating back. “Don’t know how I ever made the mistake either. He’s an amateur in comparison.”

“Well.” Harry wiped his eyes. “That explains the simmering hatred then, I expect. He must have liked you a lot.”

“He did,” Draco said simply. His eyes caught Harry’s for a moment. “Wanted an emotional commitment. Sadly, I couldn’t return the favor.”

“Why’s that?”

This time, Draco’s flickering gaze held. He reached across the table and took Harry’s hand in a hesitant grip. “My emotions were already committed, Harry.”

Two years ago. Harry looked down at their hands, and then slowly turned his own hand over until it was palm to palm with Draco’s. Pale fingers quivered against his skin and Harry squeezed gently. When he looked up, Draco’s eyes were soft, and wider than usual.

“Let’s go home, shall we?” Harry said. “Stop for ice cream on the way.”

Draco sniffed and drew his hand out of his grasp to signal the waitress. “I don’t indulge in such childish pastimes, Harry.”

“The hell you don’t,” Harry snorted. Draco glowered at him and then turned to the waitress.

“Our bill, please. And the rest of this to take away.”

When she’d come and gone again, Draco grabbed the takeaway bag, and Harry fished out his wallet and counted out the exact amount, then dropped an extra Muggle bill onto the table. Draco’s affectionate grin was visible under the soft lights from the trellis. Harry shrugged and picked up the two boxes, winding around to the back of Draco’s chair. He leaned over and brushed a quick kiss against the other man’s jaw.

“Come on, then. You’re just dying for mint chip.”

Draco rolled his eyes and shoved his chair back with exaggerated duress. “Fine. We’ll get you your damned ice cream. This time.”

“Of course we will,” Harry said loftily. “Good news is, this time you’re paying for what you’ll end up eating.”

~fin~

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Part three: Perfect Potter

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Date: 2006-08-13 04:34 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] aura-wolf.livejournal.com
*melts into a contented puddle* Ru-fic. The best. *happy sigh*

Date: 2006-08-15 04:16 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you so much! *hugs* You are so sweet...

Date: 2006-08-13 04:39 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] daisy-chan.livejournal.com
eee!
Oh, Harry. Your reputation proceeds you. >>XD

This was just lovely~ ::hugs::

Date: 2006-08-14 07:01 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] snottygrrl.livejournal.com
okay, sorry to randomly squeee, but...

that icon! [*giggles uncontrollably*]

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Date: 2006-08-13 04:55 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] lilliputian722.livejournal.com
Fantastic. Loved it.

Date: 2006-08-15 04:19 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
And there is another great icon! *chuckles* Thank you for reading, lovely.

Date: 2006-08-13 05:27 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] starbellys.livejournal.com
Thanks for the lovely Sunday afternoon treat. Your writing is beautifully flawless.

Date: 2006-08-15 04:20 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for such a nice comment. Really, it makes me feel great to know what you think when you read my work. ^_^

Date: 2006-08-13 08:00 pm (UTC)From: [personal profile] sparklespiff
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Oh, Harry. Oh, Draco. Oh, you. Every time I feel myself pulling away from H/D, you reel me back in.

Date: 2006-08-15 04:22 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Arg, you are PULLING AWAY?? *frets royally* No. Not allowed to do that, we'd miss you too much! *tackles*

Thank you so much for reading, and then for leaving me this nice comment. ♥

Date: 2006-08-13 08:28 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com
As always, I am amazed by how skillfully and seamlessly you weave utter perfection into such a simple scenario, turning it into a brilliant story.

Date: 2006-08-15 04:23 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
You flatter me too much, love. *snuggles* Thank you so much. This really means a lot to me.

Date: 2006-08-13 10:06 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] oohyaoi.livejournal.com
I was in the need for some good H/D, and was ecstatic to see that you'd written something new. Once again, youo've done an amazing job. Their relationship and the world that you've created is understated yet still very vivid. I feel almost like a voyeur with the privilege of looking into these characters' lives. You're able to pull the reader in and bring so much magic into to such a short moment that's seemingly insignificant. If only there were more writers like you out there....

Date: 2006-08-15 04:24 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Wow, what a wonderful thing to read! Thank you, love. You have no idea how nice that was for me to see. I don't really know what to say that I haven't said before because you always leave me such wonderful comments, but I just want you to know how much I appreciate this.

Date: 2006-08-13 11:35 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] fandomlurker.livejournal.com
I like your Harry -- he's so mature. And I personally enjoy reading characters who are okay with their partner's former love life. Although it's fun to read jealousy fics it's great that Harry can meet Draco's former lover, admire his looks and be sincerely polite.

Date: 2006-08-15 04:27 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Harry actually surprised me a bit in this. But in the end, I like this aspect of his personality a lot. I think that if Draco had responded to his old lover with something other than annoyance and nonchalance, Harry might have reacted differently. As it was, Draco has made it clear where his heart lies, and Harry can hardly get mad at him for having other lovers, having had several himself.

Thank you so much for such nice feedback. You've made my night.

Date: 2006-08-14 01:35 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com
Oh!
When Draco said he would make it just as good as...well, I was a ball of mush.

I adore this universe, and Your writing continues to inspire - always.
I just love the way you draw us right into the settings. It doesn't matter if it's a cafe, an entrance hall, or a bed, we see, feel and hear everything you do. That's masterful writing, and I can't get enough.

Date: 2006-08-15 04:29 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
It doesn't matter if it's a cafe, an entrance hall, or a bed, we see, feel and hear everything you do. That's masterful writing, and I can't get enough.

O.o

Thank you again, sweetcheeks. How do you always manage to make ME feel like a ball of mush? Must be your exceptionally sparkling personality. ^_~ Thank you!

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Date: 2006-08-14 02:00 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] yodels.livejournal.com
I've just had the opportunity to read both pieces through. What a treat! You've managed to weave so much strength and vulnerability into both of them. Lovely writing and wonderful reading. Thank you for sharing.

Date: 2006-08-15 04:30 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Aw, thank YOU, love! I appreciate this so much. I love to fiddle with their characters, and it makes me squeeful to hear that you enjoyed the journey.

Date: 2006-08-14 02:26 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] originalintent.livejournal.com
I loved the pacing of both parts, with the slight languor that comes from knowing another so well that their skin might as well be yours. I particularly loved Harry, and Harry's mellowed, adoring character.

I don't think any of those adjectives were quite the right ones. But mayhap you know what I mean anyway?

Loved it!

Date: 2006-08-15 04:33 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
I think those adjectives work very well, actually! *loves* I like thinking of Harry as mellow in this fic-verse. He's certainly the less high-strung one of the two. And Draco needs a calming influence. ^_~

Thank you so much for reading!

Date: 2006-08-14 04:11 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] delicatetruth.livejournal.com
Oh I loved it. Brilliant.

Date: 2006-08-15 04:34 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Thank you! *smooch*

Date: 2006-08-14 04:38 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] bluelittlepig.livejournal.com
Absolutely wonderful! I just love the way you write the interaction and the emotions of the characters and make me feel every bit of it.

How was your vacation? Hope you had a great time! ^_^

Date: 2006-08-15 04:35 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Vacation was good. Weather was cool and not too humid, and we taught the dingo to swim! 'Twas very relaxing, and I needed that. Got to write a lot...

*smoochy*

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Date: 2006-08-14 05:40 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rm.livejournal.com
Very sweet.

Date: 2006-08-15 04:35 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Thank you! ^_^

Date: 2006-08-14 06:59 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] snottygrrl.livejournal.com
guh. want to be all eloquent and expressive and tell you how lovely this is and how real your characters are and how sweet and funny and completely adorable harryshouting!draco is. but in fact am rather cold and inarticulate right now.

still [*fangirls shamelessly*]

Date: 2006-08-15 04:38 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
The idea of Draco shouting out Harry's name while in the midst of shagging another man cracked me up, too! In fact... that scene is the reason this ficlet got written. ^_^ I'm so glad you liked it.

Date: 2006-08-14 09:09 am (UTC)From: [personal profile] luthien82
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Will you marry me?

I know you get these proposals on a daily basis, I'm sure, but please consider? I can cook!

Erm, okay, what I want to say is: I love this fic and its raw feelings and the uncertainty and the careful treating of what they have. Just bloody gorgeous! ♥

Are you sure you don't want to marry me? ;)

Date: 2006-08-15 04:40 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Hahaha, actually, I can probably count my proposals on one hand. But they surprised and flattered me every time. *laughs* Thank you for making me feel great once again. *kiss* You are wonderful.

Date: 2006-08-15 04:40 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
And I love you. ^_^

ev ening in august

Date: 2006-08-14 04:13 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] ravenpan.livejournal.com
awww!!! -=snuggles them all=-

Re: ev ening in august

Date: 2006-08-15 04:41 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Hahaha! Trust me, they need it. *loves*

Date: 2006-08-14 08:00 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] alex-s9.livejournal.com
Your fics make me want to read your original writing. I adore your style.

Date: 2006-08-15 04:41 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
That is such a flattering comment! Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.

Date: 2006-08-15 05:45 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] spacetweenears.livejournal.com
MMMMMM - Ruby-Ru fic!! I loved the Draco's former lover bit!! I had such a clear picture of that in my mind. :D

Date: 2006-08-15 05:21 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you, Spacey! *misses you* How have you been? It seems it's been a while since we chatted.

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Date: 2006-08-15 01:11 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] ellie-nor.livejournal.com
This was really lovely, especially the interaction with Draco's ex-lover - turning from humour to deep emotion in an instant ::sighs contentedly::

just one quick concrit - the geographical eccentricities kept throwing me out of the story. I can give a quick Britpick if you want

Date: 2006-08-15 05:21 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Heh, sure, that would be great. I have never had a Britpicker before. Do you want my email address, or how do you want to do this?

Thank you for reading, and for the offer!

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Date: 2006-08-15 05:33 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] magentah.livejournal.com
Congrats (http://www.freewebs.com/darkestmagic/ruh0806archived.htm), darlin'. :D

Date: 2006-08-15 05:54 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you, precious!

Date: 2006-08-29 04:12 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] aziraphale-mel.livejournal.com
once again, both this one and the prequel are very pretty, and brilliantly written ((:

Date: 2006-08-30 03:04 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
Thank you, love! *hugs* Just what I needed to hear. ♥

Date: 2007-02-15 12:34 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] luci0logy.livejournal.com
So, only Draco has been in Harry's place where the sun never shines, and calls out Harry's name during sex with another - says volumes about how much they've always felt for each other, yet so subtle the way you tell it.

Date: 2007-02-16 07:25 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rurounihime.livejournal.com
I would hesitate to say that Draco is the ONLY one ever... but definitely the only one in a long time. ^_^ Which is almost as good. And omg, yes! Draco has a little trouble thinking about people other than Harry! That little mini-scene jus tpopped into my head and it was too juicy to let go. ^_~

Thanks, love, for complimenting me so nicely. ♥
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